These Things

These Things

A Poem by BMColey
"

Just a spur of the moment feeling I had.

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These Things

 

Brandon Coley

 

Promises of today always turn into disappointments of tomorrow.

 

Don't ask why these things are so. Don't ponder on these things.

 

You know I mean no harm, but a man can only be pilot for so long.

 

These things, these things.

 

They wander through my mind like a tourist.

 

I was built for this though.

 

These things, these things.

 

I keep going on as if there's a mission, although the thrill of a feeling is all I'm really missing

 

The feeling of worth and pride comes to mind.

 

Until I get that feeling back, I'll be a tourist inside.

 

 

© 2012 BMColey


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Very nice

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Awesome piece! I loved your clever, quirky lines:) Keep writing!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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A wonderful piece.

"They wander through my mind like a tourist." Clever line.

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lovely! :)

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I'm Brandon. 20 years old and I just started writing about a month ago but ever since then I just feel better through and through. I've been through alot in life but who hasn't. Had heartbreaksbut aga.. more..

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A Poem by BMColey