Why'd you have to go and disappoint me?

Some lyrics/poem I wrote. Tell me what you think, be honest. Thanks!

You've failed me once again,

oh no, I'm in so much pain

Could be amazing; this magic,

Now it's really just tragic

Disappoint, you disappoint me

I wonder if you'll ever see

That your sad sad sins shall

forever be your downfall

so tell me then, who else will you call?

Now I can never trust

cause my dreams got rot to rust

Once upon a time I cared

Now my hopes and dreams are dead

Disappoint, you disappoint me

I wonder if you'll ever see

That your sad sad sins shall

forever be your downfall

so tell me then, who else will you call?

So throw it out,

or I will shout!

Just please f*****g throw it out,

I've been living in such doubt

Oh yes I'll shout

cause I've barely seen the light, it's all

gone south

Disappoint, you disappoint me

I wonder if you'll ever see

That your sad sad sins shall

forever be your downfall

so tell me then, who else will you call?

Tell me, go ahead and tell me!

Disappoint, you disappoint me

I wonder if you'll ever see

That your sad sad sins shall

forever be your downfall

so tell me then, who else will you call?

Author's Note

WHAT DO YOU THINK IN GENERAL; DOES IT SOUND SHITTY OR DECENT? BE HONEST; YOU'RE FREE TO BE AS BRUTAL AS YOU WANT.