By Surprise

Walking down a road unearthened and brown, a thought accures to me, stirring emotions of new beginings, the excitment of what is and could become, In depth of so many tails I've been told each on as far fetched as the last, a new experiance is placed at my feet, A time to learn, and grow, see changes and become wise, So many things the world doesn't stop and listen to, let it be a heart beat, or the rustle of the wind on wheat, to know this is to be surprised, to find people, situations, events, and locations that open your eyes to a world of wonder, besotted by fate, openings come in do time and will enevidably take you by suprise.

Reviews

[Sugar and Spice]

Very good read! Very vivid :) Just a suggestion tho, perhaps start a new line everytime you place a comma, or where necessary to break it up :) other then that its very good :)