Religion

Religion

A Poem by BLACKBEARD
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A new religion formed by you and I

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Your softest touch

An invitation to a religion I never knew existed

My lips

Attached to your lips

Reciting scriptures which open doors to the heaven I feel whenever you are in my sight

 

Adolescents

Ignorant to the world which the masses belong to

The passion between you and I

Leads to the seven days of the creation of a world constructed perfectly by the curves of your smile.

© 2015 BLACKBEARD


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You are swaying away from the mainstream ideas and are trying to be fresh and embed a new look at love with the world. I like your daringness, for your poem may be short but it didn't took away your powerful message. You have talent, keep writing.

Good job :D

Posted 9 Years Ago


Interesting and intriguing...love the line about adolescents. Nice ink.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Love and religion, didn't got though..?

Posted 9 Years Ago


I'd go for more of the mind drive of religion compared to love then the actual beliefs of it..you know what I'm saying? Love the idea though!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Interesting approach to love, but not a bad idea. Sharing love can never be wrong. But with all the religious fighting in the world, good luck. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Johannesburg, Sandton, South Africa



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