Will it Surprise You?

Will it Surprise You?

A Poem by BKor
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A dark rant spawned in the heat of the moment.

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Will it surprise you?
That I dream of child corpses
And people screaming in my hands?
That I see hills of bones
And rivers of scarlet oozing in between?

Will it surprise you?
That I am the one who draws forth
The screams and shrieks of agony,
That I watch the pleading tears fall,
And I laugh and kiss them tenderly as I carve them up anew.

Will it surprise you?
That I am not the s**t, the desperate
Thirsting w***e you make me out to be?
That I am neither what you accuse,
Nor ever what you expected me to be.


Will it surprise you?
When you finally see
Your real daughter,
For what she is?

© 2014 BKor


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A splendid rant ...Thank you for sharing...:).....................

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

BKor

10 Years Ago

Thanks for reviewing it ^_^
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

My pleasure...Any time...:)...................
Nice poem...The darkness which oozes from this is just what I like. I especially like your opening stanza.
Good stuff.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

BKor

10 Years Ago

Aww thanks! Good to hear :D

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Added on January 13, 2014
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Tags: Surprise, blood, nightmares, psychopath, expectations, broken

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