A Love/Hate Mixtape

Relationship in a rut? Tired of having the same old argument over and over again? Do you know what s/he is gonna say before s/he opens his or her mouth? Here's what to do...

 

Don't

Don't do it

Not One More Time

Do NOT hit Pause

Then: press Rewind

You might not

Know it

But you've said

Enough

Let's Fast Forward

Past this Tired Stuff

Try a New Song

In a Different Key

Hit the Stop Button twice

Don't Bother me

Author's Note

My daughter the Immaculate Madonna Star said if I don't stop writing poetry she's gonna start

Reviews

[DayDreamer1292]

Yes!!!! This is beautiful and full of passion and truth. How many times can you listen to the same excuses before finally saying, "Enough, I've heard it all before." Great piece of art!

[TL Boehm]

Giggles at your daughter's threat. I love this little tidbit of poetry. Its just sassy enough to say something smart, but not so out there that I have to roll my eyes - you know? Awesome write.

[Mr. Deft Diction]

I hear a fresh beat, reminiscent of the 80's on this track. I like the simple, heavy impact of the words. I'm expecting this to be a song soon.

[J. Hampton]

DC

You...KNOW you can write....so dont even hubilize

I love it..

"But you've said

Enough

Let's Fast Forward

Past this Tired Stuff "

~ come on now....thats real as rain

and Ms. Madonna needs to get her behind behind the pd n' pen again

Blesssssssssss

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Let the 'Star' write - because it would be a disaster if you stopped! Loved the 'rap' style of the word play; I know a lot of people (sadly) will relate to the content. Short poetically sweet and to the point - great write!

God's Blessing
Phillozofee

[Bubo]

Wise words........so often we say things for affect, just to hurt.........I like the way it reminds of a VHS, and if only we could hit that stop button more often!