Say What?

Say What?

A Poem by Reaching for the clouds
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This is written from the standpoint of a young person in high school who seems to get into trouble with uncaring adults.

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                              Say what?
I hate when dumb asses ask me what I wanna do when I get done with school

What I wanna do is hang with my buds, see my girl, and be cool

Why do teachers have to get on me about stupid stuff, they make me ill

I just think old people need to work on trying to be nice, to just chill

I do what I wanna do. They should know that by now.
But so many still wanna make me do their stupid crap anyhow

Does this school make us better people, or does it just tear us down
I think most of us homies would rather just give up and go to town

Are they preparing us to get a great job, or is this just part of a master plan?

To make us their little robots, to force us to do whatever they can

I don't know why some of 'em became teachers in the first place
They should just be trying to teach, not getting all over our case

There's nothin' I love more than to run across a new one
Especially one who's loud and bossy, and weighs about a ton

I try to make 'em really think about their worthless a*s
While they are saying things like,'Sit down!', ''Do your work!', and 'Go to class!'

© 2011 Reaching for the clouds


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How I do have a high respect for some teacher's. I am sure there are a few that would make high school kids feel this way, because most teenager's, by this time in life feel they know all and don't need guidance. I like how you captured that and put it into good read.

Posted 12 Years Ago


hmmmm, not sure what to say about this...I'm sure the Teacher's would rather be doing something else than teaching those that don't care to listen. I always had the highest respect for my teachers....they have your best interest at heart. Promise.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Haaa this made me laugh but in a knowing way. I know this frustration and I really enjoyed reading this. A proverbial finger.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Very well said!
Vent away in poetic grace my friend!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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