DENIAL

DENIAL

A Story by Titilayo Sarah Eguridu
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Short story

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Who invented parties??? 
They are so overrated!
Where is Bae when I need my frayed nerves soothed?
There he is!
 I wonder what’s up with him.He hasn’t said a word to me in two days.
I guess he’s in one of his regular dark moods.
Wait! I see him! I see the trace of a smile flirting around his lips.
I haven’t seen any of those smiles in ages.
…Suddenly his head swoops down to claim a kiss from a bony looking but pretty female.
My brain is frozen in time…
I retreat hurriedly , my heart is beating faster and harder than an African Shakara drum.
My heart is at war with my feet…
Should I return or keep running???
I am sobbing uncontrollably,embarrassed ,tears slide from my eyes in torrents.
I whisper to my self…
It can’t be! It’s not him!
I have the instincts of a bloodhound!
As I wrestle to gain composure, 
he swaggers towards me with hands in his pockets and says in a nonchalant voice…
I am so sorry you saw that,
I have been trying to tell you for months!!!

© 2024 Titilayo Sarah Eguridu


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Titilayo Sarah Eguridu
Thank you for considering my work, please keep your comments respectful.

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Wow, what an ending! I really like how you spoke volumes and wrote a picture of a thousand words in less. I could feel things in it in no time and again the ending was sad but powerful. tyfs

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Titilayo Sarah Eguridu

1 Day Ago

This review captured the essence of my writing style.
I wanted to tell a story with few words.. read more
Cyprian Van Dyke

17 Minutes Ago

It's not easy to do. I'm proud of you

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Titilayo Sarah Eguridu
Titilayo Sarah Eguridu

Paris, Seine-saint Denis, France



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I am a sapiosexual ambivert who loves God, people ,words,cooking ,fashion,travel and very good music. My philosophy is to bring my best to all that I do. more..

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