A father’s love

Ode

Nothing beats a fathers love

His love is selfless 

His love is as lavish as cracks of sunshine in the cloud after a storm

He loves without ulterior motive

A father is an unrelenting cheerleader,

His love is never measured by looks,status,or good health

It’s an endless orchestra of support.

A father’s heart aches when your does, 

and is broken when your heart is broken

His love is a life insurance ...it’s reliable

His love keeps him working feverishly to provide for his family

A deep sacrificial love.

Tell me,

What can compete with a father’s love?

Author's Note

I love feedback,
However it must be respectful

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I had all of these same feelings for my dad.
He put everyone else ahead of himself.
Such a great guy he was...and lived to almost 98...a few months short.

Thank you for this poem....I related so exactly to it.

[Titilayo Sarah Eguridu]

Dear Jacob,
I am so glad it resonated with you.
Thank you.

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

This is a good father's love. You wrote it with much beauty and definition. I like how you ended it with a question, too. tyfs

[Titilayo Sarah Eguridu]

Dear Cyprian,
I am just seeing his review.
Thank you for noticing the rhetoric questions.
There were intended to usher readers into reflection mode.