The Aspiration for Inspiration

WRITTEN TO INSPIRE!

I stand not where I was placed, but near
going further would be considered a risk
a change in plan for which may not be in my favor
my feet are stuck as if they were glued to the floor beneath my frigid toes
the coat I wear is only to keep away the possibilities
they say dreams are what you strive for
awakenings are where you start
but my bed is quicksand and I cannot walk through the door of potential

Reviews

[C. Lee Battaglia]

I like it!
It has lots of potential!
But I disagree with this character, we have the choice to make potential we are just too scared to act. If we get up and try in everything we do, we can make potential.
Keep up the great work!

C. Lee Battalia

[B. Hudson]

The bed of quicksand was supposed to come off as a metaphor for basically not wanting to get up and to take on what's ahead, sorry if that wasn't clear! Thank you for the review and for reading :)

[C. Lee Battaglia]

No it was clear.

[C. Lee Battaglia]

Your welcome!