dive

falling 
into darkness 
:.
i helped you up 
helped you out 
of your sorrows 
:. 
breath easy 
falling gets better with time 
you took that final step off the edge 
:. 
here i am sitting 
without you 
and i feel 
empty 

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[LeeLee Ryder]

Dive has a wistful quality that shows how falling in love CAN SOMETIMES
feel like you're diving into a pool of dark murky waters ... Searching for
permanence while keeping your head above water. Coming to the
edge/end of a relationship and feeling like a vacant blank page...
A touching emotional journey, you took us on, BHZolo.
LLR

[Wicahpi]

Alone can be empitness.
Straight from the heart; short and sad.
I do like the way your seperate your stanzas
with the decor of periods. Cool!