life

life

A Poem by BHZolo
"

theres something about life

"
my life
nothing more than a dream
the path i have chosen 
marked by god
:. 
i can not fail 
as much as i try 
i will win 
:. 
i have given up 
let everything go 
all for you 
:. 
this journey has no ending 
marked by death 
it is my beginning 
a complete life 
:. 
what is our future 
my future 
lies and betrayal 
or love without fail 

© 2010 BHZolo


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I like it. A positive poem. Rolled like a Army marching song. A excellent poem. Only failure is not trying.
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