James

James

A Poem by BHZolo
"

for my brother

"
i will tend to your wounds 
dear brother of mine 
i've seen you grow 
from what i've destroyed 
i pray god 
that you may forgive me 
.:.
i kill myself daily 
trying to rebuild 
what i have broken
one day 
all 
will be 
well again

© 2011 BHZolo


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first line needs a tiny edit from 'you' to 'your'.
other than that this is straight to the point;
though leaving the reader with questions.
good job

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on January 23, 2010
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