dream

dream

A Poem by BHZolo
"

a lie

"
this dream is coming to an end 
as all things die 
within a single heartbeat 
rests our quiet souls 
:.
as i wake 
we let go
until there's nothing left
:. 
giving up 
it crumbles at my feet 
as i kneel and soft words escape 
a silent prayer 
:. 
never again will i dream this dream
please give up on me
i am nothing will be nothing 
forever and ever 
this is my prayer my final farewell

© 2010 BHZolo


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i just read this and started crying... i havent been on this since you first made this... btw who ever this girl is.. she hasnt given up, she couldnt have.

Posted 13 Years Ago


i related to the emotional stress of this poem.
i'm sure most of us can! most unfortunate to wake
up from dreams only to find lies.


Posted 14 Years Ago



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