Perdido

Perdido

A Poem by BHZolo
"

For a mom

"
.:.
the moon engulfs an empty city 
tonight we will be at ease again 
the warmth of your hands 
as you were holding mine 
i was crying 
.:.
sorrow fills my heart 
you could have had the world 
.:. 
the moment is coming near
a mothers heart bleeds 
for your love 
the wounds that only you can heal 
.:. 
my hands are always open 
for you to clasp them one more time 

© 2010 BHZolo


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Poem is telling me a hidden story. Could feel the distress and emotion in your words. Every added line led me to a sad and beautiful ending. A excellent poem.
Coyote


Posted 14 Years Ago


Very nice.. I loved the way you've used the words to make it simple yet effective..
Carry on the good work..

Regards,
TMS.Shammie
(Tejas Shah)

Posted 14 Years Ago



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