Why

Why

A Poem by BHZolo
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its about a girl i used to like

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Like a ghost. your surrounded by darkness 
I see your face. All along in the distance 
a sea of shattered glass. 
all i wanted was the best. but my failing was too great.
We lived for a time. a love so small on wasted time 
a distance that brought us together 
a past of broken dreams 
Now i see your pictures and my heart is broken 
Loving you was too easy :................

© 2010 BHZolo


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personally i sort of understand this.. though i am much far too young for this so called "love" but this writing is very passionate. shows your true feelings and what not. anyhow.... i did actually really liked it.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on January 23, 2010
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