Butterfly Dream

Butterfly Dream

10/14/15, 10/26/15

Never let go of your dream,

because like a butterfly

it can fly

and never land back.

Hold your dreams tight

but never dwell too much.

It will destroy your reality

and cause much pain.

Chase your dreams

wild and big.

And don’t look back

until you are done.

Hold the butterfly strong,

but don’t over do it.

And don’t dwell.

After it’s done,

the butterfly will fly away.

But don’t worry,

an another will appear.

Author's Note

Please help me improve it.

Reviews

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

An interesting write, I like the idea of the butterfly.

[Urja Gokani]

amazingly written keep it up :)

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

Well the punctuation is very good indeed. You might want o lose one of the 'strong' words in verses 3 and 4, too close repetitive. Apart from that I think it's a good piece of poetic verse. Loved it.