In the End

Looking at the stars in the sky,

we realized how lucky we are.

Though we might not be able

to reach for the sky

and fall many times

and lose hope;

We won’t give up

We will stand tall,

and smile though the tears,

and laugh at the little

careless mistakes.

Because in the end,

we are just humans.

Reviews

[Ashira Macy]

I like how wise your poetry is. It speaks of how important it is to get up when you've fallen down, and try until you succeed at something. Lovely.

[Bhumika Devkota]

Thank you.

[Quinn]

Incredible poem with lots of meaning. Love the ending as well really rounds of the poem nicely.

[Bhumika Devkota]

Thank you.

[little thoughts]

Very true. Good work ! Loved it.

[Bhumika Devkota]

Thank you.

[Quinn]

Incredible. Really makes you think about our position in the world and in the universe.

[Bhumika Devkota]

Thanks....

[Irenic]

a poem which makes the reality to come up and satisfy me. very inspirational. Good one.
Love it.
Thanks for sharing.........:)

[Bhumika Devkota]

Thank you.

[Irenic]

Welcome...........................................:)

[Sami Khalil]

A very inspiring poem with value and worth...:)...............

[Bhumika Devkota]

Thanks....

[Sami Khalil]

Welcome...:)................

[anne]

Yeah.. making mistakes and learning from them.. Falling and rising.. all part of human life.. this holds true each time we ascend and move... Lovely bhoomika..

[Bhumika Devkota]

Thank you.

[R Smith]

we are indeed, despite all mistakes we come through, well said Bhumika :)

[Bhumika Devkota]

Thank you.

[Urja Gokani]

the poem was good keep it up

[Bhumika Devkota]

Thank you.

[MJ]

We make life so much harder than it needs to be. Thanks for this :)

[Bhumika Devkota]

You're welcome and thank you for the review.