Anger

As long as you don’t

abuse your anger,

it is alright.

To get angry

shows that you’re a human.

To get mad at little things,

means that you are still growing up.

If someone gets angry at you,

don’t take in in a negative way.

It means that they care.

And if what they said it hurts you too,

it means that you care too.

To sled a tear,

shows that you have feelings,

It is okay to let tears out,

it is okay to shout and yell

your feelings out.

Crying and not drowning in tears,

shows that you are strong.

You can fake a smile,

and everyone will believe it.

You can tell fake feelings,

and they won’t know.

However,

why do they know you mistakes.

why do they forget about your success,

when all you made was a single mistake.

Reviews

[R.L. Davenport]

This opening line resonates with me big time.
"As long as you don’t
abuse your anger,
it is alright.
To get angry
shows that you’re a human."

Anger empowers when used right. But it's rarely used in such a way.

"To sled a tear,
shows that you have feelings,
It is okay to let tears out,
it is okay to shout and yell
your feelings out.
Crying and not drowning in tears,
shows that you are strong."

Also a great part. As a man that doesn't like to show weakness I will say it has to happen sometime.
But I'll never drown in my tears, only release what has to be released.

This is a great poem!
Thanks Bhumika.

[Bhumika Devkota]

Thank you.

[rach]

I always thought it was healthy to let anger out, it clears the air so you can move forwards.
I enjoy the way you wrote this piece, nice work.

[Bhumika Devkota]

Thank you.

[Ashira Macy]

The first two stanzas are what really hit home for me. Very wise words. The final stanza seemed a bit like it stood alone, almost like a separate poem. I enjoyed it, thanks for sharing.

[Bhumika Devkota]

Thank you.

[Elsie]

The anger poem you have wrote here. Is amazing you point out what anger can be and that it is okay to show anger. You let the reader know right off the bat it okay to show anger

"As long as you don’t
abuse your anger,
it is alright."

It touches my heart to know that other are thinking of positive ways to allow emotions to flow, however also see that it can turn to abuse. Thank you for sharing.

[Bhumika Devkota]

Thank you.

[Norah]

WOW..this poem is so accurate! Beautifully written indeed. bravo!!

[Bhumika Devkota]

Thank you.

[Buddhistboy73]

A simple but effective and deep write here that seems to convey so many emotions and truths in so few lines. There are a few typos in this which grate a little on the eye, but I like the overall message and sentiment.....this is what it means to be truly human for me, so thanks for sharing and reminding me....a compassionate write....:)
BB

[Bhumika Devkota]

Thank you.

[Dalton Wagoner]

I love this! This poem is so true and if I could, I'd rate this a 101%! This poem spoke to me, nay, it spoke to my SOUL! I cannot explain to you how I feel about this poem in one minute reply box, but just know that I am VERY satisfied!

[Bhumika Devkota]

Thank you Dalton.

[R Smith]

very true Bhumika, everyone remembers when you fall down but not so much when you stand tall, do we really prefer failure to success in others, maybe because when others succeed we see our shortcomings at not having the same success, so we should strive more for that moment when we too can stand tall, an excellent observation on human behaviour in an excellent poem, Bravo :)

[Bhumika Devkota]

Very well said Richard, thank you.

[stars are far]

that was very true, i loved the message that you are trying to send and it is how life should be understood. Stay blessed .

[Bhumika Devkota]

Thank you.