Looking

Looking at the stars in the sky,

we realized how lucky we are.

Though we might not be able,

to reach for the sky

and may fall many time

and lose our hopes;

We will stand up tall

and smile through the tears

and laugh at little

careless mistakes.

Because in the end,

we are just humans. 

Reviews

[R Smith]

and in the end we always bounce back, just see beyond the unreality and find peace, well written poem :)

[Bhumika Devkota]

thank you,

[Bluefire]

Amazing piece, just a few mistakes,
"Through we might not be able,"
May I suggest: -> "Though we might not be able,"
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"and loose our hopes;"
May I suggest: -> "and lose our hopes;"
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"and smile though the tears"
May I suggest: -> "and smile through the tears"
~*~
Anyway, I don't recall reading anything of yours before, I like your style and would like to read more!

[Bhumika Devkota]

Thank you,

[Bluefire]

No problem ^^

[anne]

beautiful Bhoomika....:))

[Bhumika Devkota]

Thank you anne