A smile that's gone

A smile that's gone,

the tears that won't stop.

That pain that won't be forgotten,

lives on forever. 

You should have thought

of what would have happened.

Now all you do is regret

and it's all your fault

To forget to live,

to forget to see,

now all is broken,

including the memories. 

Reviews

[anne]

an emotional touch and a proflusive write..good work..:))

[Bhumika Devkota]

thank you.

[R Smith]

lovely work Bhumika, the pain we cause ourselves, the deeds that result in our own suffering, we strive for more until its too late, you expressed such sorrow in this and it works really well, bravo :)

[Bhumika Devkota]

Thank you,

[Confuser]

Bhumika: Very sad poem indeed. Another heartbreak, another smile gone. Good writing and we do tend to put blame on ourselves. Live, love & learn. My favorite is the last stanza:
To forget to live,
to forget to see,
now all is broken,
including the memories.
Great flow, suttle and sweet. Thanks. Dale

[Bhumika Devkota]

Thank you.

[Confuser]

You're welcome!