Fade away

She faded away

without any direction,

without any path

It’s too late

to save her now

Where is she?

Who is she now?

A new identity?

Or is she just.... gone?

She warned you

that she has a limit too,

but you kept on pushing her,

with no thought.

You took her for granted,

and now you can’t see her,

How blind was your mind?

How long will it take

for you to realize,

She didn’t fade,

she went away.

 

 

Reviews

[mattavelli]

Great work with the text. Thanks for sharing.

[Bhumika Devkota]

And thank you for the review.

[R Smith]

nice to see your name Bhumika, a great poem too, love the way you set it out, the gradual fade to the end is very special and the story of this poem is a well told story that you wrote perfectly :)

[Bhumika Devkota]

Thank you Richard.

[Bluefire]

Face down in the dirt, she said, "this doesn't hurt."
She said, "I've finally had enough!"
~*~
(Red Jumpsuit Apparatus, Face Down).
Well done~
Very true, when someone's pushed hard enough they will fall away from your grasp.

[Bhumika Devkota]

Thank you.

[Bluefire]

No problem

[anne]

Wow..bhumika..good job done with it..very clear and strict point presented so well..keep penning..:))

[Bhumika Devkota]

Thank you anne.

[Confuser]

BDunderthestars: I loved it, Fade Away is a wonderful title and the style and formatting added flavor to your wonderful writing. You kept building and the ending is phenomenal....How blind was your mind...Thank you so very much. Great writing, intriguing. Dale

[Bhumika Devkota]

Thank you Confuser.

[Confuser]

You're welcome!