Trust

Trust

A Poem by Bhumika Devkota

Trust.

Trust is not a easy thing,

You don’t know who is loyal

or who will keep a secret

or a friend.


Trust is the strongest feeling

above all,

You trust who you love

and who you are willing to do anything for.


You have to be careful

of whom you trust,

for not everyone is a ally

that you thought of.


It will take someone

a long time to win someone’s trust,

but within  second,

it might turn to rust.


If you want to have someone trust you,

trust them back.

Trust is a two way highway,

but some just don’t see it


Don’t ever break someone’s trust,

for it is the easiest way to break someone's heart.

Maybe they are nice enough to forgive

but they won’t ever forget.

© 2015 Bhumika Devkota


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That is amazing poem. It speaks of the truth, it also shows how much h thought you put into this poem. You show that u have a understanding on what trust is and how it can effect others. I am glad that you were able to catch the meaning of trust.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Bhumika Devkota

10 Years Ago

Thank you for the review.
you perfectly depict what trust should be like, great write!!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Bhumika Devkota

10 Years Ago

Thank you.
so true, once gone it will never be regained, beware the breaking of trust, fine writing from you, well done :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Bhumika Devkota

10 Years Ago

Thank you.
This piece is so true. I like the way it just flows together. Nicely penned.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Bhumika Devkota

10 Years Ago

Thank you for your review.
♔ CrownedDevil ☾

10 Years Ago

You are most welcome.
The frustration came through very clearly in this poem. People can learn from these words. Well done!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Bhumika Devkota

10 Years Ago

Thank you Mila.
Broken pieces fall around when trust is broken and where they go depends on us but they always leave a change in our thoughts and future actions - I love the writing and the theme. There cannot be any games when it comes to love and trust - Very well written. Thank you so much. Dale

Posted 10 Years Ago


Bhumika Devkota

10 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words Confuser.
Confuser

10 Years Ago

You are so very welcome!
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I hate it when I tell someone a secret and then a different friend tells me that they heard my secret. I feel frustration in this poem, and it reminds me that we always need to be careful. Thank you. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Bhumika Devkota

10 Years Ago

Thank you also for review and sharing your story.

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Added on February 27, 2015
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Bhumika Devkota
Bhumika Devkota

Albany, NY



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Hi! I am Bhumika Devkota. I am the youngest from my extended family, which makes me a little - I suppose a lot- spoiled at times. I live with my parents and my older sister, who is currently a senior,.. more..

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