As Classical Music

Page 69 from the book Syzygy (2020)

She is beautiful
As classical music
Surrounding me
With a lovely string piece

Reviews

[Mirror]

With a lovely string piece.......

Dear B, I imagine how music feels in the atmosphere! It fills up our space and makes our surrounding beautiful. Music is life and a universal language.

The "She" here is lucky to have you. You have liken her to life. Then to your readers, you use the universal language to explain her beauty

Then you projected your feelings with the space that is filled up with lovely string piece of her beauty. Stay in that atmosphere!

[Brad Dehler]

Mirror. Wow yes, you got it. You lived up to your name for certain! I appreciate you saying that. "Liken her to life" you are breaking the code. I will stay in that atmosphere as much a*s possible. Please, you do as well!

[Mirror]

Sure! You saw through me, I simply returned the favour!

And yes, I will stay in that atmosphere, sir!

[Brad Dehler]

Delightful smile over here

[Thomas W Case]

Superb work. You paint this picture well.

[Brad Dehler]

Thank you sir!

[Davidgeo]

Excellent comparison.

It's lovely when a person can uplift your entire existence with their presence. Their song permeates you and everything you think about looks and feels a little warmer. Love is very lovely music when it's played right, it uplifts everything it touches.

Hillary Hahn's violin talent is a good string simulation of this feeling.

[Brad Dehler]

Thank you Mr Davidgeo. Much appreciated. I dont believe i am familiar with that piece so I will definitely look that up and listen. Your take on "the presence" is so right

[Ken Simm.]

This is a love spell set to music. It would be interesting to hear what music people hear when reading this. I hear Tallis Fantasia by Ralph Vaughn Williams.

[Brad Dehler]

Thank you for this input Mr Ken! I will look that song up. Appreciate that reference!

[Betty Hermelee]

Stunning brevity poem, so few words, big emotions….. you bring classical music to life….quite romantic as well…..
Warmly B🌷

[Brad Dehler]

I appreciate you Betty, thank you. Yes... so lovely right, intermingling romance, infatuation, love....

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I love this....so much description with that less is more theme...
and I love classical music as well.

[Brad Dehler]

Yes, thank you! You get it, feel it... hear it

[Arundass TP]

Excellent writing. Loved it

[Brad Dehler]

Thank you Arundass!

[Khloevhr]

Hi, stunning poem. is the lovely string piece the instrument or the ribboned laces of toe shoes from a tiny dancer a ballerina as she plies and pas de bourree and grand jetes in circles around you in spotted pirouettes to avoid being dizzied by music that is as beautiful as she could ever imagine. Ending with an arabesque then curtsy. I think music is beautiful too. it is all encompassing like the arms of someone special. the way it translates in movement, dance is the definition of beauty. yeah, i typed some French Ballet terms, i'll brag tha I know them but am missing the accent on some of the E's. So, my typing is not as Clever or Clean or Beautiful. Kinda annoys me. Should I google how to add it. uhhmmm,... that's the beauty of it. i don't have to; i can do what i want. Surround myself in my own choices. own decisions.

[Brad Dehler]

Thank you so much Khloevhr. I appreciate your insight and reflection as a ballerina. Dizzying analogy indeed, uou sound like you are a ballerina. Dance and movement, you really add a new side of this poem i never expected.