As Classical Music

Page 69 from the book Syzygy (2020)

She is beautiful
As classical music
Surrounding me
With a lovely string piece

Reviews

[Davidgeo]

Excellent comparison.

It's lovely when a person can uplift your entire existence with their presence. Their song permeates you and everything you think about looks and feels a little warmer. Love is very lovely music when it's played right, it uplifts everything it touches.

Hillary Hahn's violin talent is a good string simulation of this feeling.

[Brad Dehler]

Thank you Mr Davidgeo. Much appreciated. I dont believe i am familiar with that piece so I will definitely look that up and listen. Your take on "the presence" is so right

[1809 Black Plague Decem..]

Dear Brad Dehler,
Wow! Love it, simple
Recommend Haiku, and Senryu
It's 5-7-5 syllables,
I think you'd do great,
great poem
===Maynard

[MCS]

Conveys so much sentiment in so few words. Enjoyed!

[Einstein Noodle]

i think enjoyment of classical music takes study and patience not demanded of our music of today .. my dirty ol' man thinks of the thin strings of sheer lingerie ... the key of G maybe :)))))) seriously tho ... the string sections of orchestration are so powerful, sweet and vigorous ... it's a lucky man whose life "She" is in .. best of the day to ya
E.

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Beautiful short and sweet

[Lisasview]

As an artist and a classical piano player I understand and really love this simple...yet complex poem of yours dear Brad.
Lisa, in Majorca

[Brad Dehler]

Yes! I am glad i hit the mark :)

[Lisasview]

As a poet I find it wonderful when my readers really "get it"

[Brad Dehler]

I know exactly what you mean!

[LadyNaida]

Beautiful piece. I use music as description in a lot of my poems. I love this!

[Brad Dehler]

Thank you Lady Naida! I appreciate that

[LadyNaida]

You're welcome! As I read this piece I pictured a cello with it curves and the sound of the strings as they're being played.

[Brad Dehler]

yes. I enjoy your imagery :) Thank you for that

[Thomas W Case]

Superb work. You paint this picture well.

[Brad Dehler]

Thank you sir!