As Classical Music

Page 69 from the book Syzygy (2020)

She is beautiful
As classical music
Surrounding me
With a lovely string piece

Reviews

[Mirror]

With a lovely string piece.......

Dear B, I imagine how music feels in the atmosphere! It fills up our space and makes our surrounding beautiful. Music is life and a universal language.

The "She" here is lucky to have you. You have liken her to life. Then to your readers, you use the universal language to explain her beauty

Then you projected your feelings with the space that is filled up with lovely string piece of her beauty. Stay in that atmosphere!

[Brad Dehler]

Mirror. Wow yes, you got it. You lived up to your name for certain! I appreciate you saying that. "Liken her to life" you are breaking the code. I will stay in that atmosphere as much a*s possible. Please, you do as well!

[Mirror]

Sure! You saw through me, I simply returned the favour!

And yes, I will stay in that atmosphere, sir!

[Brad Dehler]

Delightful smile over here

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

I just re read this still luv it Brad

[emmajoygreen]

Music is... ...the all about and all within, carried on the wind, in the auditorium. Carry it inside your head, it moves to the heart and.. is always and ever easily called. Think 'Rondrigo's Concierto'

Saucy rhyme compared to a source of utter enjoyment!

[1809 Black Plague Decem..]

Dear Brad Dehler,
Wow! Love it, simple
Recommend Haiku, and Senryu
It's 5-7-5 syllables,
I think you'd do great,
great poem
===Maynard

[Brad Dehler]

Thank yoU!

[1809 Black Plague December]

you are most welcome Brad Dehler, Manard

[MCS]

Conveys so much sentiment in so few words. Enjoyed!

[Brad Dehler]

I am glad you liked it :)

[Einstein Noodle]

i think enjoyment of classical music takes study and patience not demanded of our music of today .. my dirty ol' man thinks of the thin strings of sheer lingerie ... the key of G maybe :)))))) seriously tho ... the string sections of orchestration are so powerful, sweet and vigorous ... it's a lucky man whose life "She" is in .. best of the day to ya
E.

[Brad Dehler]

Thank you for sharing your thoughts E
You bring back the music all over again

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Beautiful short and sweet

[Brad Dehler]

Thank you!

[Lisasview]

As an artist and a classical piano player I understand and really love this simple...yet complex poem of yours dear Brad.
Lisa, in Majorca

[Brad Dehler]

Yes! I am glad i hit the mark :)

[Lisasview]

As a poet I find it wonderful when my readers really "get it"

[Brad Dehler]

I know exactly what you mean!

[LadyNaida]

Beautiful piece. I use music as description in a lot of my poems. I love this!

[Brad Dehler]

Thank you Lady Naida! I appreciate that

[LadyNaida]

You're welcome! As I read this piece I pictured a cello with it curves and the sound of the strings as they're being played.

[Brad Dehler]

yes. I enjoy your imagery :) Thank you for that