No matter the fervent belief that life can hold on indefinitely, comes a time when the planet is top-tilted on its own axis and the harvest's not for reaping. Is the same with the ocean.. it moves inecessantly but forever holds its own precious magic.
Unusual comparison of a changeable ocean and not such a drastically changing forest.
People always are unrecognizable to others, what's going inside at the level of the ocean's deepness.
Beautiful poem.
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Thank you for your insights and for the very generous compliment. Thank you Kate. Have a wonderful d.. read moreThank you for your insights and for the very generous compliment. Thank you Kate. Have a wonderful day
Paints a portrait with a question mark ending, but then again, do we ever know. Things change, life changes, no two days, no two facial expressions, no two feelings are ever the same. Mistakes come from assuming that the shoreline is exactly the same as you left it. Funny it is to go back and find it looks the same but everything about it is different. Very cool thoughts here. Something I can definitely relate to and wish I had written.
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Wow that is a very big compliment sir, wish you had written. I am humbled. I'm taking a knee. Thank .. read moreWow that is a very big compliment sir, wish you had written. I am humbled. I'm taking a knee. Thank you thank you.
Not sure if this one is observation or critique. The speaker acknowledges the differences between himself and the other, seemingly without complaint. But there is an air of dissatisfaction there, because of an inability to know the other better. Maybe he desires to know too much.
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I appreciate any feedback, and you John the Baptist, often has a truckload of insight. Thank you for.. read moreI appreciate any feedback, and you John the Baptist, often has a truckload of insight. Thank you for spending time on this one. Yes, perhaps it is the consternation derived from the desire to know too much.... I hadnt thought of it that way
Hmmm, i like the imagery of the forest changed. it feels so personal to me like me. ebb and flows of the tide. Changes. personality. yeah me too. i go from introvert nerd to extroverted party starter. life of the party. So very, very, very much relatable.
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Thank you for relating with this poem. Yes, the ebb and flows; we -like the tide....___---___---___-.. read moreThank you for relating with this poem. Yes, the ebb and flows; we -like the tide....___---___---___---
Hello I am interested in sharing some of the poetry I've produced since I was little. This is not for career or monetary gain, not that there is anything wrong with having art as a career, but I am ju.. more..