In the Desert

In the Desert

A Poem by Brad Dehler

In the desert,

            The parched sand

Indicative of my throat

In the forest,

            Moisture pooled on my tongue-

            Akin to the leaves

The sea…

            The sea deceived me

© 2022 Brad Dehler


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Powerful writing, thanks for sharing.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brad Dehler

2 Years Ago

Absolutely, much appreciated from you
The sea is so profound, treachery, therefore is in its nature. Whats amazing is how your words think of people like the sea.

Moisture pooled on my tongue-
Akin to the leaves

Please accept my compliments on the superb imagery here. These are the kind of things I dream of writing and I'm sure all who love writing do. So delightful!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brad Dehler

2 Years Ago

Such a great compliment. I am humbled. Thank you so so much!!
AYVID N

2 Years Ago

Have a great day :)
Brad Dehler

2 Years Ago

You too, have a great day DIVYA :)
This can be interpreted in many ways, but I'll spare you my code breaking... Uhh skillZ. Hahaha


Thanks for sharing, I've enjoyed the read.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brad Dehler

2 Years Ago

Absolutely Dennis. That is the charm of writing poetry sometimes- the double or triple + meanings. S.. read more
Dennis Wolf

2 Years Ago

Yeah well.. I like to have the freedom of flooding words and expressions the readers way... Hadn't t.. read more
Some things are easily seen "Cause and Effect" and we can shape our reactions accordingly.
Some things are "Cause and Affect", making you feel a certain way, surprisingly, counterintuitively.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Wow, that was way too cool. Just the thoughts that flow in this, the comparisons, the depth of the feelings. I am rambling here but it is the fault of this poem. not me. I will be back to read more.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brad Dehler

2 Years Ago

Heartfelt thank you. Double "cool" vote. I appreciate you. Really happy this has positive impact for.. read more
The sea offers many depths as it is deep and dark. The salt water would parch you like the desert. Yet, the shear mass of water seems to want to water you like the leaves amongst the forest. Deception for sure! Enjoyed this thought provoking write.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brad Dehler

2 Years Ago

You are much appreciated. I hope for people to find it thought provoking. Thank you for being so kee.. read more
The sea is incredibly moody. More so than the desert or forest. I liked this descriptive piece and its imagery, very much. Thank you for posting.

Chris

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brad Dehler

2 Years Ago

Thank you Chris!!
Oh yes... the sea. The sea is quite deceptive. I recommend mountains. They've served me well. This is a well written musing on nature, as well as something deeper. As deep, perhaps, as forest silence and sea itself.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brad Dehler

2 Years Ago

Thank you Zoe! I agree with you... Now I'm heading to the mountains!
In the desert is an ocean we crave for but can never reach - the mirage. Nice writing.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brad Dehler

2 Years Ago

Thank you sir Andrew
deception...that oasis that becomes a mirage...
love can parch the heart.
j.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brad Dehler

2 Years Ago

Yes sir! thank you Mr Jacob!

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Added on August 7, 2022
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Brad Dehler
Brad Dehler

Salem, OR



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