The sea is so profound, treachery, therefore is in its nature. Whats amazing is how your words think of people like the sea.
Moisture pooled on my tongue-
Akin to the leaves
Please accept my compliments on the superb imagery here. These are the kind of things I dream of writing and I'm sure all who love writing do. So delightful!
This can be interpreted in many ways, but I'll spare you my code breaking... Uhh skillZ. Hahaha
Thanks for sharing, I've enjoyed the read.
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Absolutely Dennis. That is the charm of writing poetry sometimes- the double or triple + meanings. S.. read moreAbsolutely Dennis. That is the charm of writing poetry sometimes- the double or triple + meanings. Searching for any meaning, so imperative.
2 Years Ago
Yeah well.. I like to have the freedom of flooding words and expressions the readers way... Hadn't t.. read moreYeah well.. I like to have the freedom of flooding words and expressions the readers way... Hadn't tried much poetry in English... The few things I have produced are really not as I had hoped they would turn out but maybe I'll share some later on.
Some things are easily seen "Cause and Effect" and we can shape our reactions accordingly.
Some things are "Cause and Affect", making you feel a certain way, surprisingly, counterintuitively.
Wow, that was way too cool. Just the thoughts that flow in this, the comparisons, the depth of the feelings. I am rambling here but it is the fault of this poem. not me. I will be back to read more.
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Heartfelt thank you. Double "cool" vote. I appreciate you. Really happy this has positive impact for.. read moreHeartfelt thank you. Double "cool" vote. I appreciate you. Really happy this has positive impact for you :)
The sea offers many depths as it is deep and dark. The salt water would parch you like the desert. Yet, the shear mass of water seems to want to water you like the leaves amongst the forest. Deception for sure! Enjoyed this thought provoking write.
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You are much appreciated. I hope for people to find it thought provoking. Thank you for being so kee.. read moreYou are much appreciated. I hope for people to find it thought provoking. Thank you for being so keen and giving me the time :)
Oh yes... the sea. The sea is quite deceptive. I recommend mountains. They've served me well. This is a well written musing on nature, as well as something deeper. As deep, perhaps, as forest silence and sea itself.
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Thank you Zoe! I agree with you... Now I'm heading to the mountains!
Hello I am interested in sharing some of the poetry I've produced since I was little. This is not for career or monetary gain, not that there is anything wrong with having art as a career, but I am ju.. more..