Holes

Everyone

    Has holes in their thinking

Evermore in their speaking

Our dubious task is

    To not fall inside

Reviews

[emmajoygreen]

Seems that each day, perhaps each season or term, presents data relevant from the past. That in turn leave those 'holes' for yet to be decisive completion. Research covers a multitude of factors as you surely know. For many, holes are an essential.. we need dig in order to discover more but with care - else there could be a landslide!

[Brad Dehler]

Quite right! Thank you for stopping by and sharing your thoughts!...

[Relic]

Yes, everyone seems to have an opinion on something. As long as we don't fall into their side of the story without losing our own views I think we can find agreement.

Well said.

[Brad Dehler]

Thank you Relic. I appreciate your perspective in the matter!

[Raschel]

I really like this poem. While it's quite short it makes one think.

[Brad Dehler]

That is fairly common to my style. The message is there, and i wish to not muddle it with verbiage. Thank you for the compliment

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I just love this piece...so expressive and less is more.
you allow us to fill in the holes, hopefully before we fall inside of them.
Too often we speak without thinking...and often if we do think first, our thinking is skewed....
and what you said in your "about" makes perfect sense...Poetry is not a money maker...but it can leave a legacy if we are read.
j.
j.

[Brad Dehler]

Thank you J. Really appreciate the feedback and insight. The legacy, so important indeed. Definitely never been in it for the money but there is a fascinating "other" currency.

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree Brad. All of have holes we try to keep hidden. Even from ourselves. Very strong us of words and thoughts my friend. You made the reader think. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Brad Dehler]

Thank you Coyote, you inspire me to write more and to post more! Much appreciated

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Brad.

[Kim S.]

So true, this is well said......

[Brad Dehler]

Thank you Becks :)