Working it Cold, Finding Us Broken

Hope it makes you feel something

so you want to cut me deep
okay lets go ahead with that
so you want to feel big do you
you want us to feel like our death

pretty sure I put my time in babe 
don't need you to tell me otherwise 
I see it for myself 
don't need you to repeat that for me
I'll figure it out on my own

so you want it to cut me deep do you
okay lets go ahead and have all that
so you want it to hurt me that bad do you
fire close and land fatal blows that sting forever

doesn't matter so long as it's close to us
so long as we're talking 
bout you and me. 

Reviews

[James]

The deepest cuts come from those we care about. Good poetic rant, anyone can relate to this.

[Dmi]

Thanks for taking your time and giving this one a read James. Much appreciated man. I'm glad you took the time to comment as well. I'm not the most conventional writer so it's cool you took to this one. Later dude!