THE DIAMOND...AN INTERLUDE, THE CALM BEFORE THE STORM..............

The Discovery.....

 

 

The  Diamond…an interlude, the calm before the storm…..

As I sit here thinking:

I am not to think

But just flow like

The mind ink of an invisible poet

Just drink.…

More & more Moet

But,

Times & shots

Catches up to a girl

 

I wasn’t born to grind and hustle

In this world

A  protected sheltered little lady

But deep down inside

I desired the cover of the night

That hot hype

The bling and money blowin…

 

I kept that hidden

Under long dresses and flat shoes

Not showing nunna that

Sexxy

But…..

He convinced me …

When our eyes met

He fishtailed off infronna me

In a black n chrome Givanni tired Vette…

 

I was like ,“mmmhhmm,He could

Be the one the I would get”

But I kept it true to my game….

Religion was my claim to fame and God I really loved

I told the Good News from door to door

 

I learned

I listened

 

To him I would go on bended knee and implore:

“Tell me father what am I to do

I am feeling this temptation to leave you and

This is all so new.  Today I saw this man

And he looked me in my eyes-I didn’t turn away

From your plan I allow me to stray and he saw straight through me

He came and went between my thighs

How can you keep me?  When I myself am not willing to resist.

I feel a change coming over me.  It is bathing me, caressing my body

I beg you, help me not to desire to be kisses

I ‘m asking you to help me forget this misguided trist.”                           

Lying in my bed with thighs

Of two world grinding through my head…

Should I keep my calling,

Or

Should I release this inner need of excitement…the Me

That I been stalling see…

I still  see his eyes

And

I need to know more…

I’m hopin

I’m prayin

That I could be the chick he opens

The door for

Yes be that bad miss he goes to war for

And keep it hot just for him

Like 1200 thread count Egyptian sheet

Unforgettable once you’ve felt them

 

I’m a Boss' girl

Inside of a sanctified building

But my eyes -my mouth -my ears -has been infected with his wind

I desire him-I desire Sin

 

Now.......present moment

 

I’m in this club wit him(not the one I love)

Looking at this thick stripper work a pole

She lookin at me and him through

The space in-between her legs

She see he on and now

She bout to beg…for a lap dance and give a grand performance

With her a*s…

And  I been doing shots of Ciroc

And I drank a Pink Partie

Looks to me like she a lil freaky…like she likes to get a lil naughty

Ima give my mister a mini surprise

I beck and call her with 5 100dollar bills fanned out

 

And  whisper in her ear…Bilar

Bilara por mi

Give me a lap dance and shock this n***a to his socks

Now Ima go home and box…

And ride him like Sea biscuit

He ain’t never had it like this Ima get him straight twisted

 

He gone and I’m drunk

His cover's blown

And Ima work joe blow…

He thinks he’s my man

But he just don’t know, he a pawn

Being used to put on my ultimate show………………..

 

 

BABy©2012

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Renny]

"Im praying that I could be the chick he opens the door for" i like this cos it applies to me lol, well written though it was a bit hard reading through the slangs and abbreviations. you could be more formal for another time please or maybe you could invent a new genre of poetry written in this mode.

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Interesting story. I like the last two lines and these lines:

"Like 1200 thread count Egyptian sheet
Unforgettable once you’ve felt them"

[MS. BABy]

Thank u Renny... Lol...The slang is the streets and this is where she is...I like the thought of invention...

[MS. BABy]

K.C. Zbryk...thank u so much for this, I have been away for a while in school, I so appreciate your kindness it is making me write more intothis character that came from an inspiration years ago....

[K.C. Zbryk]

I like the backgound to this piece befor it gets to the actual situation. It is all brilliantly composed and it gives a very personal view of this character that we have been following. It also explains some of the gaps in the story. I thought the endig to the piece was astounding, and the closing leaves the reader wondering what will come next. This was a phenominal Piece, and i cant wait to read more!

[MS. BABy]

JIBEY.....OH HOW I HAVE MISSED YOU....SMILING

[Jibey]

This is a wonderfully creative poem.. teasing out a story of inner conflict and overwhelming desire, enjoying the sheer exuberance of sensual pleasure and escape from the duty of door-to-door devotion... Sweet temptation, and sweeter fulfillment, the unleashing of pent-up desires and the rush of satisfaction... for we are made in His image and our creative core demands a way that pleasures and flows... juices from the belly, hand to hand, carnal knowledge, passion and purpose

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the photo and the story in the poem. Need to darken the letters for us old folks. I like your writing. Honest and strong emotion in your poetry and story. Thank you for the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[MS. BABy]

thank u Rosetta Star....smile

[MS. BABy]

EMF>>>>>U R SO GOOD For my WRITING EGO...I printed the font in this manner because of the delicate nature of the woman, but also because it is like an invitation to a wedding seeing who this person is underneath all of the drama....and yet she is still in side of a soliloquy ...thank u so much I kiss ur beautiful fingers mind and eyes...smile