THE HUNT FOR A MAN'S DIAMOND...

And it is just beginning...

The hunt for a man’s Diamond

 

Pacin back and forth

like a strung out junkie

lookin how he got guard dogs

And flunkies watchin his back

OMG…the cat is so whack…

But

The truth of the matter is

We should all be afraid

The test of time

And of rhyme and reason

Has come to past and everyone

Is about to become amazed

I’m semi-faded

Gorgeous but just as jaded as the day

I was when he to me became an enemy

Wow

How time past when one is not having fun

I casually start a conversation

About when we are going to

Get our plans movin…my pre-wedding jitters has begun

SMH…

It has really gotten this far

That’s okay though

Cuz a gurl needs money

Security, control and a

Smack brand new car

Who gives a care about love

This is the reason I’m here…LOVE

I heard he home

From a friend of a friend

Wifey all smiles

She gotta child

Something I didn’t know

So know he’s a daddy too…that’s a fool for you

He got some time with his family

Out on a furlough

I wonder how long it gonna be

Before he lets us know

The streets can’t keep no secrets

And I guess that’s a good thang

But

I am looking forward to his body

Oh how I have been craving

I know he mad

And I truly don’t care

I know he wants me

And can’t stand that I’m here

I’ma play this hand

To the death of me

Cuz -I hate this man so much

Because loving him has driven

Me

Completely crazy….

 

BABy©2011…the Diamond

Reviews

[Jibey]

Wild and intense, the poetry moves along like a breathless, pacimg marrative, testing out and prowling around its forbidden prey... craving for a body that makes the juices flow... longing for that crazy time

[MS. BABy]

thank u all so much I really would like your feed back because i want to create this into an ongoing sage hopefully a mini book...this is a new chapter more preceded thank u so much,

[Rene Velez]

cool, love has an ugly side, well written Baby..

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Baby, I could barely read because my eyes kept darting back to delicious pic you posted with this............an awesome, bare bones, raw write.

[Renny]

Great job!

[MS. BABy]

smile@UV.....

[POETIC VIXEN]

amazing....tune in on the regular people.....awesome...a hip hop novella....alrighty.....

[MS. BABy]

EMF...thank u so much for your encouragement and hit...I so love u and what u do..

[MS. BABy]

@Sadat Shams...no it is not in is a new Noir as EMF calls it...smile...Start at the beginning of the book, this is the latest installment..