DIAMOND'S STAGE OF VENGEANCE

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DIAMOND'S STAGE OF VENGEANCE

stages of vengeance

I’m looking at this fool
With evil in my eyes
As he just so carelessly
Drops this piece of news into my lap

See I dun took a bad nap
And HE…don’t know who I am
That man went and married something
Way beneath me

I see
So he figures that if he
Move on he can save me
But
I just don’t die like that

Never will I accept this Ice pick
To my tatted back
His name in bold letters

I remain calm
And say as a matter of fact:

“Well
He ain’t on no more
So why should I worry about
A n***a that’s on the living deads floor

But
You
On the other hand
Ain’t you supposed to be his man?
We’ll see what he got to say about that

Unless you scared
And really don’t know how to act
I think that we should go shopping
Take my mind off this bit of bad karma”

BECAUSE
Me and you
Gotta do some
Being seen together...
All of this I say to myself

I’m gonna get him
Her
His world
Now
We gonna see if he wished
He would have kept me for his gurl

BABy©2010…The DIaMoND

Reviews

[MS. BABy]

thank u so much EMF... I needed that...just added a new one slowly but ...smile.

[EMF]

Keep adding as much as you like. You are creating a new noir, and it's damn good. Forceful and raw. Absolutley wonderful

[MS. BABy]

thank u so much, I have got a couple of more to add to this.....

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Strong and real. I like this.

[Coyote Poetry]

Poetry and strength in this chapter. I like the woman desire and goals. Her direct approach and no fear attitude is making the story strong. I like the ending of this chapter.
"We gonna see if he wished
He would have kept me for his gurl"
Thank you for sharing the tale. A excellent chapter.
Coyote

[POETIC VIXEN]

I am loving dis...........