Will You Accept Me As I Am?

Imploring....

The flaw of imperfection runs deep

Its gaping wound oozing reminders

of yesterday...

 

I am a woman

Nothing more

nothing less

Will you accept me as I am?

 

I speak quickly....

I feel all the time

I AM HORMONAL

How does this revelation rub you?

 

 

Loving you has never been the problem

Keeping you always have

Satisfying your desires was never the chore

Keeping you from straying...

 

I shall never accept less

Never shall I accept less

I will rant and rave

Because simply put....I am a woman in love.....

 

Will you accept me as I am?

 

Suspicious

Insecure

Happy

Sad....self-indulgent

 

Loving...

Loving....

Loving.....

 

WILL YOU ACCEPT ME AS I AM?

 

I can only pray you will

Let the congregation say

Amen

 

The elimination of sin

A calamitious Sin of excess need and desire

There exist too much need inside of me for you

 

I have to know that no one

And nothing takes away anything from me

Captivate me inside of

A fradulent Palatial Garden of Eden 

 

Will you accept me as I am?

 

Help me!

Please help me cure my pains

Don't make me face myself

 

Kiss me in the morning

Touch me with your warming

Graze.....

 

Can you accept me as I am?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

BABy(c)2011

Reviews

[Vinod Kumar U K]

Great Devotion and desire of humble prayhood.... Nice to understand the Almighty` grace and gift...Amen.

[Jeremy Baker]

The images made the flow of this a little disjointed, but the message was assertive and impassioned. Well written!

[K.C. Zbryk]

The repetition made this piece extremely powerful, and accentuated each line. I was also fond of the pictures that you chose, they accented the pleading nature fo this piece. This is a question that we must ask ourselves and those that we are with. Simply because if they cant then it may be a waste. Brilliant poem!

[Raven Starhawk]

Certainly gave me something to think about. Aside from that it flows so well and really is more of a insightful message than a poem, but that is just my opinion. Anyway this was wonderfully written.

[J Todd Underhill]

I could see this being a slam poetry piece. I read it as such, and it went well. As for your question, yes we shall accept you as you, nothing more, nothing less, you are perfect the way that god created you!

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

The desire for unconditional love is real easy to see in this poem.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Such insight shown here...the inner thoughts and analysis and wisdom...everything is here, truly a great pleasure to read :)

[Enigma]

Beautiful and full of insight into the mind of a woman, head over heels in love and yet, with a detailed picture about her thoughts and wants. Well written.

[Judas Hammer]

introspective, deep, I like this poem. To look through the eyes of the fairer sex. How can you go wrong. Very beautiful