Will You Accept Me As I Am?

Imploring....

The flaw of imperfection runs deep

Its gaping wound oozing reminders

of yesterday...

 

I am a woman

Nothing more

nothing less

Will you accept me as I am?

 

I speak quickly....

I feel all the time

I AM HORMONAL

How does this revelation rub you?

 

 

Loving you has never been the problem

Keeping you always have

Satisfying your desires was never the chore

Keeping you from straying...

 

I shall never accept less

Never shall I accept less

I will rant and rave

Because simply put....I am a woman in love.....

 

Will you accept me as I am?

 

Suspicious

Insecure

Happy

Sad....self-indulgent

 

Loving...

Loving....

Loving.....

 

WILL YOU ACCEPT ME AS I AM?

 

I can only pray you will

Let the congregation say

Amen

 

The elimination of sin

A calamitious Sin of excess need and desire

There exist too much need inside of me for you

 

I have to know that no one

And nothing takes away anything from me

Captivate me inside of

A fradulent Palatial Garden of Eden 

 

Will you accept me as I am?

 

Help me!

Please help me cure my pains

Don't make me face myself

 

Kiss me in the morning

Touch me with your warming

Graze.....

 

Can you accept me as I am?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

BABy(c)2011

Reviews

[M Garcia]

love it

[Dream Weaver]

Almost a religious revelation in this womanly ode.
Great insight from a woman's perspective, emotive
confused caring and yearning, well done...

[Chris Taylor]

Great, great love poem. I love how you make a stand in this piece. You will not, and should not accept anything less than a man's full devotion and total commitment. Your poem really drives this piece home well. Great work. I rated this very high.

[Coyote Poetry]

A amazing poem my Poet friend. Love is for the strength and the weaknesses. I like the emotion and the desire of your words. A powerful ending to a outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Rikkevi Rue]

your caress with such bliss and slap with such sting all in the same speak...
you bare such soul and disguise so much with your emotional veil of blackness...
you plead with such needy susceptibility yet command with such steely adamant...

Yep! that proves it, PURE WOMAN! very engagingly tendered my dear!

[Teri B]

The confusion of feeling is everywhere evident in this poem. And it so closely mirrors the actuality in the heart of a woman....in the hearts of all women, all men.

[Silent Serenity also kn..]

Wow riveting creation here! The burning question of acceptance! "Will you accept me as I am"

We are all imperfect creatures & no one is any different yet we struggle for acceptance from society! Why should this be? If we were all perfect wouldn't that be boring....we would never have individualities! Be proud of your imperfections & I understand wanting to be accepted, but first see yourself as worthy of anything, just like you stated "I shall never accept less....Never shall I accept less"

I love this piece! You created what so many have wanted answered most of their lives! You have amazing writing talent, keep up the great work!

[EMF]

He will. Beautiful and mesmeric. A gifted talent who gifts her love.

[Dunlack]

This was a beautiful piece! I love how you put it all one the table...Both the good and the bad.

[ForTheWorld]

heart warming poem...nice piece...feeling of a woman in love with someone, describing it is totally unique!!!! =D