WHEN THE LAST PETAL FALLS............

WHEN THE LAST PETAL FALLS............

A Poem by MS. BABy
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VANITY....

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When the last petal falls…

And all those giving adoration

Gone, what is really left of life to carry on?

 

When plump subtle appendages are

Dry and withered, who cares to look

Or even to smell my nonexistent fragrance

Gone just as well-

 

Then "

I saw them sweep pieces of dead petals

As well as beautiful ones taken

Down by the weight of the fallen;

 

As all the beings were eyes,

And being only one vessel

One organism;

Giving way to the reality

The realization of becoming...

 

Transcending through a brilliant light

An epiphany

With glaring clarity and knowing

Fading and disappearance  

BABy©2011

© 2011 MS. BABy


Author's Note

MS. BABy
this was written as a challenge....to view fading beauty....

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Neva Flores - Changeful.....I m humbled, thank u so much Neva....

Posted 13 Years Ago


Ta'Shandra ~...hello tashandra...I have so enjoyed watching your growth...thank u so much

Posted 13 Years Ago


Stormy Weather...thank u so very much i love ur name.....

Posted 13 Years Ago


I saw them sweep pieces of dead petals
As well as beautiful ones taken
Down by the weight of the fallen;

I'm not worthy!! You have quite the talent girl! :]

Posted 13 Years Ago


Joe Shetina......thank u so much for your comments, I am getting so much encouragement, and i am reading by behind off...i am enjoying your work also

Posted 13 Years Ago


Gilbert Saint..thank u Gilbert, i am enjoying u also.....smile

Posted 13 Years Ago


Manpreet....thankk u so very much, i appreciate ur love

Posted 13 Years Ago


EMF...emf u make me blush....smile thank u so much

Posted 13 Years Ago


thank u so much poetrybunny

Posted 13 Years Ago


hello ms.princess....thank u for your encouragement...smile

Posted 13 Years Ago



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MS. BABy
MS. BABy

San FRANCISCO, CA



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I am just me, a poet that enjoys words and intrigue...I am inspired by others and love the musing over life...I am poetry...smile. I'm an innovator in the poetry world and am CEO of my own Production.. more..

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