I AM REMEMBERING YOU

when loving another is not possible, but certainly can happen

Counting memories...

Feeling the touch of forever

I remember you

How my lips felt under yours

The fullness, and their heat bruises me pleasurably

I need... No

I miss you....

Thinking back to that clandestine meeting....

When fear and anticipation lie inside of me awaiting birth

How calming you proved to be after that first hello...

I miss you...

Pathways of multiple choices...

The chosen one honorable but not that one of the greater passion...

Kissing you, loving you longing for you, makes this life hard

Rather than leave behind the feeling  of desire

I resort to daydreaming you into my existence...

Lying inside of your world....indulging in every inch of you

BABy(c)2011

Author's Note

loving poetic men is infectious, keeping yourself inlove, a job in ahalf....

Reviews

[Dunlack]

Wow I felt this one...

[Teri B]

Wow! I love the passion and the heat here, as well as the depth of feeling! It's exhilarating, and makes me miss him, too! :)

[....]

So very nicely written...xo

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

A poem that is superbly written and "I resort to daydreaming you into my existence" said it all, perfection xD

[MS. BABy]

Kumar thank u

[MS. BABy]

Thank u Gypsy Dreamer

[Vinod Kumar U K]

Nice poem.........

[Gypsy Dreamer]

This has a surreal feel to it, a longing... a what if... I enjoyed this.

[MS. BABy]

Good morning Styxx....you always pick out those love sick lines...I so love poetic men, there is nothing else like you all on this planet, .....

[K.C. Zbryk]

I like the choice of vocabulary that you use inthis poem, especially te line 'and their heat bruises me pleasurably'. It gives the piece a very distinct tone. Well done