Weights of Many Upon My Tired Shoulders.....

Reality of hardships and life

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

This Ache///...(gasp)

Burning that permeates ...

It radiates my muscles...

Interrupting breathing...(I am holding my breath)

Causing me Pain...

PAIN.....So interwoven///

Nothing can separate IT from ME...

 

Pretense no longer is an option

Living in Dense Dark denial

Do i see really///what has become

 

Killing me softly

Destroying what was given as

A gift...

Kindness

Compassion

Caring....Tenderness...Selflessness...Feeling...Welcoming....

 

Weighted down...

Have i become i have......Forward and backward///

Down i am weighted.....

 

Lighten me...

(echos inside of a zephyr)

No ONE!

Can remove this Pain from

me

i shall Call

 

Selah......

 

 

 

Author's Note

Sometimes....this is....

Reviews

[MS. BABy]

@Rene....I know what u mean about the Spoken Word and Slam style...but I wrote this from the inner torment of a person not wishing to tell others how much they are being hurt by pressure..sorta conversational within the self...thanks for the comments they are always wonderful and construtive....

[MS. BABy]

inyrdreams...thank u so much this means alot to me coming from you

[VelvetRosetta]

Shame when pains, be emotional or physical cannot be healed or subsided by any means.
A wonderful emotional write.

[Vinod Kumar U K]

Suffering weight...too hard.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Yes, I feel the strong message of once times elecuonce compunds your nature as a writer, well written, a great piece.

[Rene Velez]

I see this or your style as something that should be read on stage "spoken wordish" I would say, I side more on the full sentences of a poem then the jagged cut thoughts that you express, your style is good but I am filled with the def poetry style to the gills from all the slams I have seen, it's like rap music...something that was underground has been made commercial and turned to mush by corp. greed.
but I love the struggle and message in your write...

[Becky C Strukamp]

Love the pixs with the poem. They compliment each other. Wonderful poem.

[MS. BABy]

Yas...thank u so much I write in the wee hours of the morning ...I work inside of a hospital so I can watch human emotion so deeply...thank u for the encouragement, Please everyone I always have to come back and spell since it is so early....smile...

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Such a great poem that permeates the powerful emotions that come with the way you have used words and sentence length, awesome :)

[MS. BABy]

Hello love..and thank u so much, I am enjoying looking at ur growth also...smiles..