Weights of Many Upon My Tired Shoulders.....

Reality of hardships and life

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

This Ache///...(gasp)

Burning that permeates ...

It radiates my muscles...

Interrupting breathing...(I am holding my breath)

Causing me Pain...

PAIN.....So interwoven///

Nothing can separate IT from ME...

 

Pretense no longer is an option

Living in Dense Dark denial

Do i see really///what has become

 

Killing me softly

Destroying what was given as

A gift...

Kindness

Compassion

Caring....Tenderness...Selflessness...Feeling...Welcoming....

 

Weighted down...

Have i become i have......Forward and backward///

Down i am weighted.....

 

Lighten me...

(echos inside of a zephyr)

No ONE!

Can remove this Pain from

me

i shall Call

 

Selah......

 

 

 

Author's Note

Sometimes....this is....

Reviews

[MS. BABy]

I am humbled marie..

[MS. BABy]

thank u Poetic Beauty..I love ur pic

[Poetic Beauty]

I think we all get way overloaded with the problems of life sometimes and it seems they come in multiples at a time that make us feel like we are being drug down a gravel road or like in you poem being smashed to the ground with the weight. I love the imagery and the photos you choice to go with this piece.

[Marie Harrison]

I could feel this weight on my shoulders as I read your poem.
It's poem of darkness to me. Loved it!

[Joe Shetina]

Through this poem, I feel like someone's looked into my thoughts and worries. It reads like someone's thoughts. It's so in the moment. Awesome write.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

I know these feelings well........wonderfully penned. So nice to meet you Baby :)

[MS. BABy]

Thank u very much Libby...Good evening

[Libby]

Great description and very accurate, loved the unusual format and variation in font size and type.

[MS. BABy]

For some Kumar suffering is a way of life, I am experimenting with writing from a darker point of view. thank u for all of your feed back

[MS. BABy]

Thomas I am humbled thank u so much