Weights of Many Upon My Tired Shoulders.....

Reality of hardships and life

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

This Ache///...(gasp)

Burning that permeates ...

It radiates my muscles...

Interrupting breathing...(I am holding my breath)

Causing me Pain...

PAIN.....So interwoven///

Nothing can separate IT from ME...

 

Pretense no longer is an option

Living in Dense Dark denial

Do i see really///what has become

 

Killing me softly

Destroying what was given as

A gift...

Kindness

Compassion

Caring....Tenderness...Selflessness...Feeling...Welcoming....

 

Weighted down...

Have i become i have......Forward and backward///

Down i am weighted.....

 

Lighten me...

(echos inside of a zephyr)

No ONE!

Can remove this Pain from

me

i shall Call

 

Selah......

 

 

 

Author's Note

Sometimes....this is....

Reviews

[MS. BABy]

Jeremy you always see things that I place.....thank you so much

[MS. BABy]

Manpreet...I bow to ur generousnes....

[MS. BABy]

EMF/////YOU make me blush...I am totally humbled....smiling

[MS. BABy]

thank u chris...means so much coming from you

[Jeremy Baker]

Nice, especially the biblibal allusion to conclude. Interesting and original.

[Manpreet]

As I always say I simply love this exceptional freshness in your work.

[EMF]

Some poems are exceptional. Others are better than that. This one is far beyond exceptional, from its subject matter to the use of unconventional punctuation to the imagry.to...Ah to hell with it. It's perfect.Perfect plus.

[MS. BABy]

Thank u Neva...I so love ur work....

[MS. BABy]

Joe and that is how I wrote it.....thank u for reading and understanding....