ZODIAC LOVer

A HOT STAR RIDE or IS IT?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Zodiac LOVer

 

Filtered,
Granules,
…….Heated;
Provides growth and swelling
Dictates a yearning….
My Beta
…….to
Your Alpha
Secular idioms and jargon
Fail to define by the naked
…….I
What exist
…Co-ejaculation…

Verbiage penetrates
My nucleus
Droplets condense
…….I dispense
Suspense and offer no recompense
For the thrill given-
A comet driven expulsion
…And
I ride its tail
Frail but sturdy

A Bilateral NINE
Elliptical LINE
…Can enter and conquer
And define
What a Prime Modal is…

Extending your mass
…I clasp its twinkling light
As if it gives me more
Life
&
Pleasure feel

The disproportionate measure
...regurgitate A mental
Zodiac of us…
My water flows
...and…
Grows yours
Twin lust
My air bears barometric pressure
Expectorate me inside
…of the universe and
Give quadratic blessings
I implode and explode simultaneously

…To love me is not to contain
But frame and arrange with care
Deliver me …
Exorcise my love
Gazer beware

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

BABy ©2009

 

 

Author's Note

I love the sky, the universe.....I dare to dream...to love to lust to desire....whatever your cerebellum conspires.....

Reviews

[MS. BABy]

hello lovely brenda, thank u for ur way cool review...smile....

[MS. BABy]

@kumar....thank u so much I am glad that you enjoyed, I enjoyed sharing it with you

[MS. BABy]

@Thomas...YOU are way cool thank u so much for the encouragement....thank u so much I am getting to all of that awesome work in my box

[Sleepless]

nice poem very original !!!!:) awesome and cool poem !:)

[Vinod Kumar U K]

Nebula beauty beyond imagine.. nice work.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Epic and terranical to the point of exiliration, well done, great read.

[Stormy Weather]

This is really cool. I like how you did this, there's many ways to attempt poems like this and I think you did brilliantly. ^_^

[MS. BABy]

thank u so much Manpreet....I appreciate your encouragement

[MS. BABy]

I love ur new Pic awesome, and thank u for reading and enjoying this piece I enjoyed writing it I love the stars and to me it so coinsides with love and bring forth life.

[MS. BABy]

I cursey to ur enjoyment Joe...smile thank u very much