TRANSMUTATION

Mental emotional

 

Movement in translation

 

Incoherent phrases and logic

Light from a far off prism

Clinging to the abstract of my frame

Taking into consideration the ugly of life

Killing softly the desire of fertile flesh that causes cures

How timely is the death of an idea…?

 

Laughter

Insane laughter making ones head dizzy

Grasping at the focal point of that irritating noise

Constant laughter

 

A painted face

Disfigured underneath…a pancake wax job

Happy in a stroke of a brush

Until you peel back the grease paint

SCREAM….is this me?

 

Gripped with fear

Flooded with unconscious memories

Memories of something

Something that called me touched me told me to look out of the window before I drop that finalstrainofsnot

Jumping into a pool of air…

Just air

Just air

Just air

Eliminating funk, no more of the obvious putting on of airs and of the front

Trying to get along with society

I am creating dense darkness inside of deep solitude

Regretting nothing owing nothing but taking

Taking

Taking

Taking away your choice of when love shall be given

When tears will be shed

Giving you a spectacular display of

TRANSMUTATION………

Moving out of this realm

I have

Evolved....see me

BABy©2011

Author's Note

I wrote this a few minutes ago while sitting at my station...losing one of my favorite patients....this is what was going through my mind.

Reviews

[Thea]

I enjoyed the poems from the beginning up to the last! Well written... :)

[MS. BABy]

thank u marie, I was just sitting at my station across from her room where her family choose to withdraw care her siblings and mom were there and I just started writing...there is such a feeling of helpless when nothing else can be done so i just wrote what I felt

[Marie Harrison]

Oh how sad...I just read you Author's notes.

Loved your poem, what a whirlwind of change!

[MS. BABy]

Coyote, I have been honored to become ur poetic friend you offer such encouragement and undying support...I am also enjoy reading your work

[MS. BABy]

I am glad that u enjoy this biggerthanu....and it seems we all flow on the same vein at times huh?...thank u very much for your support

[Fairy Willow]

Oh my days! I am seriously impressed, i think that this is one of the most influencial, stunningly brilliant and intelligent poems ive read for ages! Wow, you have done such a good job, im sorry to hear that about one of your favourite patients. Really well done doll, brilliant. Could read u all day. X x

[Rene Velez]

stunning imagery and words....

[Becky C Strukamp]

You composed a very solemn piece, and one so sad but a part of life, you captured the moments you were in beautifully and were able to create it in writing so well, that its like the reader is there with you. Excellent.

[Jeremy Baker]

Very emotional and evocative.