AFTER THE SNOW FALLS:

MENTAL ELEMENTAL....

 

Starting out

Cold, and wet

Disorientated from rain drops clouding my binary vision

Collisions with the element that is bring me utter discomfort

Then

A freezing wind is given refuge during my time of passage

Snow...

Falling fast and hard

Covering every inch of my humanly frame

Not caring that I am in power on this planet

But

It covers me and is deceived by this stature

I am not inanimate

Nor am I a tree which is sturdy and can handle

The beauty, the pain, the foreboding of your nature

Seeking protection

None is found

Screaming for the constant downfall to subside

How much more will this fragile suit that drapes me bare?

 

My cries fall upon deaf ears

The whiteness of your beauty blinds me

Convinced

That nothing matters anymore

Given in to the frost bite of numbness

The fact that it has come and begun and is

 

Engulfed in a blizzard, no thoughts of my own

Pain and pleasure existing cohesively

Where does the ending begin and the beginning end?

Mental Death

Stinging the lids of the purest eyes

 

Asking , beseeching

Running crazily looking for the answers

Trying to find another color

When did I lose myself?

Where am I buried?

 

What became of me….

After the snow fell…

BABy©2011

Reviews

[POETIC VIXEN]

the view....

[MS. BABy]

Hello Sean, thanks for the read and I am glad you enjoyed and nice meeting you also

[Sean Allen]

Brrrr... this was a masterful piece of writing. I'm so happy to have met you BABy

[MS. BABy]

I love Alaska mr. Jackson.....thank u so much

[John Jackson (El Juero)]

I like this. Soon here in Alaska, soon.
Excellent writing!

[MS. BABy]

Angleink I really love ur name and thank u so much for the read...

[light and ashes]

Magnificent! I really like your style.

[MS. BABy]

lol...I know marie, I am in N.O and it was so hot today, thanks for the love.....

[Marie Harrison]

Love the snow,,,these images you creat
are beautiful.
Will cool me off
in the hot summer sun
as I drive in my car.