HUMANITY

CONNECTIVE ELEVATION

HUMANITY

I am Egypt…
The first Dynasty…
Writing on the walls came from…
My kindling…
I am china…
The Great Wall…
Came from my dreams…
I am Ganges…
The Dalai Lama…
Is awed at my beauty…
The stories of…
Africa comes from me///
They light the sky like the…
Eiffel tower…
Spring time in Paris…
Like the dawn of the…
Amazon jungle…
Hot…
Rainy…
The challenge of a life time…
I am…
The salt of the Dead Sea…
Life without me…
There is no life without me…
I am henna…
The source of carbon friendly colure…
Arabian…
Sheiks read the…
Holy Koran and pray…
Looking to the…
East…
Then to the…
West…
Shalom behind a screen I beseech…
Freezing
But warm in my chinchilla
Vodka
And Sturgeon Eggs ready
I look out upon
A Red City
While visions of
A lone Lotus and
Cherry blossoms bloom in the midst of Mount Fiji
Ciao Bella
Greets my on lookers as
Italian made shoes hit cobble stone
3Gtechnology
Shoulder to Shoulder
People
Moving in dark suits
Take my seat to have a taste of blow fish….sometimes it’s a death wish
In Taiwan
I rise to the glorious moments of
Freedom
Opportunity is at my every corner
The home of the
Hidden nameless foreigners
And
The Mile High club
Zone of the hustlers
The
City lights at my feet
Who can I be?
I can just be
HUMANITY
I am
Human
This is me

BABy©2010

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Reviews

[MS. BABy]

thank you so much ...I am humbled.

[biggerthenu]

this is dope how did u come up with that very creative and perfectly written i would sign out whats my favorite line but i liked it all but dam!! The home of the
Hidden nameless foreigners classic
and the pic said it all

[MS. BABy]

thank u willow and actually no i didn't work on it no more that about 15min...I am one of these types of people who has an active imagination..LOL.....
I love being transported through words....

[Fairy Willow]

WOOOOOOW! This is amazing. So perfectly written and worded, you must have worked on this for a while. Nice. I had to read it twice to get mmy head round its complexity yet smooth rhytm. :)

[MS. BABy]

thank you so much Samith...I am enjoying you as well

[Samith Pich]

OMG This poem is so good. I was initially afraid that the subject matter would create a poem that is too broad and general. But my fears were allayed as son as I read the first couple of lines:

'I am Egypt…
The first Dynasty…
Writing on the walls came from…
My kindling…
I am china…
The Great Wall…
Came from my dreams…
I am Ganges…
The Dalai Lama…
Is awed at my beauty…'

Wow - this poem is epic and grand and I was glad you focused on small things as well:

'I look out upon
A Red City
While visions of
A lone Lotus and
Cherry blossoms bloom in the midst of Mount Fiji
Ciao Bella
Greets my on lookers as
Italian made shoes hit cobble stone
3Gtechnology'

This poem is so good, so indicative of actual humanity, without being crasss or cheap - this poem is going straight to my library

Thanks for sharing

Samith

[MS. BABy]

thanks chris for the love....

[MS. BABy]

COYOTE THANK YOU FOR YOUR UNDYING SPIRIT..YOU ARE A MOST WONDERFUL MAN....I BOW TO YOUR LIFE LINE

[Coyote Poetry]

I'm 1/2 Ojibwa. My Native American belief. We are one. The four winds connect the world. The circle of life is based on four races working together as one. Each race with a purpose and a strength. Will take the black, yellow, red and white to gather as one for peace and happiness to happen. I like the logic in your poem. I pray all children in this world is safe and have a place to rest/eat. Thank you for a outstanding poem.
Coyote