QUEEN SIZE SPIT

POETIC SLAM.....ABOUT ME...

QUEEN-SIZE SPIT

by Babysixnineone Brown on Thursday, May 6, 2010 at 1:40am

Not your everyday
average queen
I make a queen size
scene
for a queen size being
spit so thick
thick is how
I spit
the genre’s
called obscene
I’m remembering
I’m solar
no
maybe just
bipolar
So much colder
flu like symptoms
its hot but your
sweater’s on your
shoulder
I’m much older
so I’m bolder
world gave me
a new name
more hotter than
cold her
call me a cougar
cuz I’m too old
just can’t fool
her
young victims
gota butane
tool fa sure
queen size with
big thighs
flip and fluffy
so thick can’t
lift the film
from your eyes
since its
your girl got
you sizeblind
look locked
in time as I
walk by
oversexxy
never taking
second prize
no longer ostracized
stepped on the stage
I thought she’d
cry
spotlight in my
eyes brown and
glowin so they hypnotize
feel my words flowin
and yeah ya’ll
checkin my size
a mocha Grande
juicy surprise
I makem rise
out their seats
that is
words come
off my
tongue
do you hear
both the
left and right
hemisphere of your
frontal lobe chatter
I remove all dead
brain matter
I’m your lyrical
doctor proctor
prostate shocker
make a man wanna
rocker
wanna meet my
parents and be
in the inner
Circle
built by oldman
Focker
I ain’t gon
mock ya
just had to
let ya’ll know
ain’t no
spoken words
gon flow
till I say
so

BABy

Reviews

[Rene Velez]

cool poem or should I say rap cause that's how it flowed, a bit of urban brovado...

[November Gold]

I LOVE THIS!!!! :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Nice strong words. I would like to hear them spoken. A lot of writers and poets are using the internet to spread their poetry with spoken word. I bet you could do well. Thank you for this poem. Direct and honest words making your point loud and clear. A excellent poem.
Coyote