NOTHING EXTRAORDINARY.....

WHEN RAGE IS

Streams of it pouring

pouring from every which a way.....

Daily bread being begged....

The inside of the rebel trying to prove to the self, that it can become healed

It can become contained

It will survive the threat of unseen mayhem

Connections severed from past regeneration

Forming a duality that continues to issue forth commands

Pathways of intricate hostility road map the planes of

the hidden agenda

Benevolence

Why does such a beautiful word look ugly

and gruesome

Making for illness and obstruction of thought?

The Killing fields are ripening.....

Shall I force the harvester from the fields...

OR

Shall I prepare wine for the aftermath....

BABy(c)2011

Reviews

[MS. BABy]

@poppy...thanks so much I was dealing with that emotion at that moment.

[Maimai]

love it :)

[Cassiopia Summers]

I completely agree with HopelesslyDevoted here... this is truly a great piece. Good writing!

[Helpless]

well this poem is extraordinary! fabulous writing!

[November Gold]

Wow! I know rage like this, and I am glad that you are so gifted with words and that you were able to come here and spew this one out in words not actions!

[Rene Velez]

interesting write, rage is a harsh thing to deal with, and can overwhelm most emotions to the point of danger...

[Ruth]

WOW! This is so strong love...sometimes we need to purge and let it out rather than to act...I get such frustration here but also....do we take fate as it comes and raise our heads or sink and deny pure actions? Purity of heart and standing up for what is right is paramount :) Great poem!
xx

[Gilbert Saint]

Anytime.

[MS. BABy]

@Rue, and @ Ruby..thanks so much I am so exhausted from tonights Shift.....I can't even go into deep comment and love....I am glad you all spurn me on...

[MS. BABy]

@SAINT...NO i wrote this so I would not BLOW THE FREAK UP...and how I felt was important at this time because this was a purge, and if the reader took it...great If they didn't I STOOD..because I took the time to write it out instead of acting..I wrote it like this purposefully because it was what I was at that moment...but thanks for the READING even inbetween the lines literally......I welcome your mind....LOVE BABy