Frozen

Frozen

A Poem by BackupAccount: Summer D.
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The season of winter is a beauty to behold.

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Frozen

The bitter winds swirl…..
Our scarlet cheeks flame and plume….
Frigid embraces....

© 2012 BackupAccount: Summer D.


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Author's Note

BackupAccount: Summer D.
I think this is a haiku. I have NO experience whatsoever with them. I had actually wrote this months ago but I didn't know whether or not I should post it.... I decided to take a leap here. Criticism is welcomed and valued.

Version 2– **EDIT ** : I changed the ' feather ' part, as I did agree with Dragon. The feather was there for a reason but... it might've been misleading.. :)

I believe this is the second one I've wrote in my short lifetime?

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Added on March 6, 2012
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