Different Tune

Seemed like a song, yet felt like a poem. Up to you to decide!

I, I feel alone 

But why, is this a home? 

Can't I, just take it in 

Softly, softly kill me please 

Don't ask why 

I don't even know 

Treading paths on rolling stones 

I might, might just fall to death 

Take my plea, don't take my chance 

In this ode, I beg to you 

You've got my soul, my heart 

and my personality too 

Take everything, what you need just do 

Radiated skins all burn right through 

Tired arms and lengthy screws 

I'm no deceiver, I'm no recluse 

I don't need money, I just need to lose 

The prayers talking, I don't hear the noose 

Maybe I'm stuck in my own reviews 

My heart is breakable but please don't abuse 

Take what you want, I'm of no longer use 

The pain and the suffering, I'm driving through 

Floodlights crashing my empty cruise 

Tired limbs and arms drifting hooves 

This is not a home if It's a different tune 

Author's Note

Fire away!

Reviews

[Kelsey]

I love this. It reminded me of a song, but I think it could swing both ways. It's really great and I love the way it flows and the story it tells. Lovely job. x

[B30]

Thanks :D

[Shreyas Tripathy]

I was in the mood for reading an emotional poem, and this is just what I wanted !!!
Very well written :)

[B30]

Thanks! :D That was such an awesome comment!

[Shreyas Tripathy]

you're welcome !