Society

It's a creative thought of society, my personal thoughts and what I see of it as a whole.

Eyes are dilated 

Words are complex 

Skin tones are reberrated 

Our music is overrated 

Ears are blood bags 

Ghosts are imagination 

Fractions are penetration 

Childhood has become a revelation 

We are the fallen rations 

Never a chance to witness changes 

We are the in-sync crowd 

We ain't loud 

Our pictures form clouds 

But we're ants looking out 

The society is like a human drought 

Forever fraud 

Society is a kid 

It longs to be kicked 

It is a celebration 

But we will never be missed 

It is a transformation 

There will never be kings 

Criticism, whoever still cares 

We are the forefathers, we share 

People out there, they ain't rare 

To see people suffering 

But yet, they still stare 

Author's Note

My personal message, don't take it too heart. Just bomb me with whatever you have!

Reviews

[Pearlie]

the rhythm of the song is amazing and brings you right in!
"Ghosts are imagination,Fractions are penetration, Childhood has become a revelation" love these lines especially, but the entire poem has wonderful descriptions and images and really takes you to another place and I love it!
Amazing work

[Conor Larkin]

This is fantastic. The rhythm of the poem is extremely compelling and imagery is pretty interesting as well. Great job!

[B30]

Thank you! :D

[Kelsey]

This is absolutely amazing. It's so nicely written and the flow is lovely- it reads like it just sort of came to you as you wrote it. Great job. x

[B30]

That was spot on; it just happened to process my mind as I wrote word after word. That was a great review! Thanks!