The Great Escapade: Prologue

The Great Escapade: Prologue

A Chapter by B30
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The Great Escapade is a sci-fi, thriller, action, fan-fiction adventure in the dystopian future, revolving around politics, people and revenge.

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Prologue

"The dystopian future is not for the brilliant-minded, nor is it for the sane. But you and I make up a world of epic proportions; so tell me, who is to blame?"

Rhettaus, a country never lacking in resources, built to sustain and with the power of authority ruled across all nations, is the namesake of the country and the role model to follow. With a direct government and the sadistic society brought to shame, Rhettaus more than makes up for itself with the power to bring about justice in the most aggressive and cruel ways. The same way the rule of the game has changed, Rhettaus is more than just a country, more than just a home; it is the hell and heaven to both sides of the world, a cruelty punishment that if not dealt with severely will remain unchanged, manifesting itself in all its own creations and tumbling down a wrecked empire that was sought to end all human work that achieved democracy. 

But a new order will arrive in the dystopian future, set to realise that human fate only writes our own notes, but never to keep them. Will this new order set to vanquish the deaths of hundred thousands, or will it cripple what was the question that was never answered:

"If the world sought out to destroy, did it accomplish it's objective? Moreover, did we, accomplish the objective?"

Follow the footsteps of the Arenna family, the Rhettaus government and the soul of the dystopian future in a do-or-die eclipse of the coming. Will we accomplish it, or will it be another one that bites the dust? 

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The Great Escapade will be the first of my works, so please give me feedback so I'd know if the story is good enough or is it a rip-off. Effective criticism is welcomed. Thank you!


© 2012 B30


Author's Note

B30
The Great Escapade will be the first of my works, so please give me feedback so I'd know if the story is good enough or is it a rip-off. Effective criticism is welcomed. Thank you!

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First chapter in and I am still on a Dredd high so I see some similarities. Not that it's a bad thing, but still pretty much basic and I would love to read more about the government. I'm also not very much awake, so following reviews will be nonsense.

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My real name is Benny. B30 is my alter-ego in everything I do. I aspire to be pretty much a: director, host, actor, artist, writer and a poet. Although these are just a few, I love writing rhy.. more..

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