Animal and Man

i wrote this on 2/23/10 in my second period pe/health class.

Theres very little difference

Between Animal and Man,

When ever we meet

It's always a strange occurance.

 

In the end Man is worse,

Animals may kill one another,

But we use our weapons

To destroy our brothers.

 

We may be superior,

But really it makes us inferior.

We're simply smarter than animals,

But deep down we all know we're cannibals.

 

Our instincts are the same,

theres no one to blame,

It's the way we are,

They just don't have a car.

 

We're barely out of the jungle,

But we still manage to bungle,

Every oppurtunity

To Achieve Perfect Unity.

Author's Note

be nice plz! :D

Reviews

[Flames_of_Desire]

Great work,bro! :D

[Joe]

This is a very good and very true poem. You have a good rhythm that helps the piece flow pretty good. Great job! Keep it up!